Join me for some quips, quotes and vignettes from the trenches. Short and sweet.
Tuesday, April 29, 2008
A Story
I am Lost by Sarah Strem
Me and my mommy went to ECONO foods. We were there and then I got lost. Mommy was scared. She didn't find me. And then my mommy found me and then we went home.
Mommy and Sarah went to Econo foods. Sarah did not listen to Mommy and went scampering off. Mommy tried to hold it together by getting the groceries and looking for a naughty lost daughter. Mommy yelled, "Sarah!" to nobody in particular. Sarah couldn't hear Mommy cause she was sniffing flowers in the flower freezer. That girl got a good talking to. The End
12 comments:
I love that little budding writer. Tells it like it is that girl.
I would like to read Mommy's version of the same story.
Mommy and Sarah went to Econo foods. Sarah did not listen to Mommy and went scampering off. Mommy tried to hold it together by getting the groceries and looking for a naughty lost daughter. Mommy yelled, "Sarah!" to nobody in particular. Sarah couldn't hear Mommy cause she was sniffing flowers in the flower freezer. That girl got a good talking to. The End
Both versions are funny...now, that is!
EEK! I was scared just reading the first retelling. Nothing's worse than your kid disappearing into thin air.
I pity the fool that tries to take my SarahBeara.
Awww how sweet! I hope that you save the stories like these and show them to her when she gets older!
Did she spell her last name "Strem"? Cuz that's really cute.
It was a typed story. She forgot the A. I kinda like Strem.
I like how she got ECONO spelled correctly.
Very good Sarh.
And capitalized too, ktie.
Was that Strem with a long or short 'e' sound?
Just wonderin'.
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